So since I teased you all with the first page of The Black Daughter (several times now…) and I’ve now gotten my results from school, I figured I would share a little more of the story with you.
I submitted the whole 2000+ words to my teacher in early June and got back my grades only a few days ago. The comments were all valid, a couple of places she picked up on superfluous words (ACK! After all my editing!) and even one cliche statement, which upon further thought, actually needn’t be there. I can change it up.