Review: Transforming Love


TransformingLove

2 stars

Read on November 28, 2014 — I own a copy

Synopsis: Jenny never expected her thirst for freedom to lead to her capture. Family secrets prevent her from running from the only man tempting enough to make her submit to her body’s desires.

Gryph is dark, sexy, and determined to win Jenny in the Slag, a contest revered by his kind. As the leader of his Clan he’s used to getting his way, until her. Can he give Jenny her freedom while winning her heart?

Bookish Things: 65 pages. The cover certainly drew my eye, but it’s still a bit simplistic. This is book #1 in the Koning Clan Series

Where to buy: Amazon on kindle for $0.81

My Review: 

Transforming love is the 2D version of some of the hotter shifter erotic tales available.

The characters are flat (except for in the loins area!!) and the story jumps from one scene to another in the blink of an eye. Add to that, that characters seem to just drop into and out of the story as required and no further dimension is added.

This book solely is focused on the sexy stuff, and I don’t think thats a bad thing. The sex scenes are quite primal and base, but natural. All dark Dominating Alpha extending his ownership over young, naive Jenifer. Jenifer, who usually flaps around like a twit, yet somehow makes life altering decisions after reading an old book for two minutes.

This book needs more. More character building, more world building, more scene construction, and more storyline. Just more.

A few things I noticed:

29% – …could hand and(delete the d) overbearing male.
46% – marring (marrying)
76% – we’re done for (to)day,
93% – …our tub.”.” (Double punctuation)

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